Neither Here No There
Tuesday, January 1, 2008
Story Title: Neither Here Nor There
Author: Zaire
Story URL:http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/NHNThere_Z/
Reviewed By: BeautifulColours
Title: 2/5
In my opinion, your title doesn't suit your story. I was wondering why it is 'Neither Here Nor There' until I saw that line in one of your chapter. It actually only shows that Danson is 'neither here nor there' when he's in a fight with Rainie
Forewords: 10/10
Simple, straight-forward, intriguing to readers.
Poster: 4/5
I like your poster. It gives off this dark vibe as if representing the darkness that'll befall on their fate.
Originality/Creativity: 10/10
Shame on me if I give you a low mark on this. It's the first time I've read something like this ;D It makes me anticipation everytime I click on the 'next' button ^^
Flow: 14/15
Not too fast or not too slow. Your story is progressing well with each chapter.
Plot: 14/15
A creative plot with beautiful way of expressing it. I can see the beginning, progress, peak, climax and ending
Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary: 19/20
I tried hard, scrutinizing every sentence to find mistakes. Your choice of words was... wow. Keep up the good work!
Characterizations: 10/10
Characters' emotions and personalities shown well in your story
Writing Style: 8/10
Your writing style is really good. I can picture everything as I read your story.
Total: 91/100
Please remember to credit and post it! ^^