A Thousand Tears [Review]
Tuesday, July 15, 2008
Title:A Thousand Tears
Author:iMortal
URL:http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/thousand_tears/
Reviewer: Shia @ Secret-Melodies
Title: 4/5
I really liked your title although it was short it gave a lot of meaning.
Poster/Background: 7/10
I liked your background more than your poster itself because the background matched more than your poster did with your story.
Forewords: 5/5
All I have to say is that it was short but touched me personally a lot
Plot: 13/15
LOVED the plot just loved it although it’s common but yours gave it a different feeling to the usual ones, and just to add in I loved the ending of each chapter like seriously.
Flow: 7/10
Your flow was good but there were some parts where I was confused on either if it was the past or what but it was still pretty nice
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/15
Your spelling was okay very small mistakes and your vocabulary wasn’t that big but other than that it was pretty good
Characterization: 9/10
I liked your characterizing honestly although it is also common with the good girl and the bad boy but I liked it still it really matched with your plot.
Originality: 4/10
Like I said the plot is very common and nothing new really but you did add in your own little things which I liked
Writing style: 4/5
I like your writing style although the chapters were short unlike all the other one shots out there that take me forever to read it still made a lot of sense.
Overall enjoyment: 10/10
I REALLY enjoyed this story is all I’m saying lol
Bonus: 0/5
Sorry don’t give out bonuses
Overall score: 73/100