Supernova [Review]
Tuesday, July 15, 2008
Author:GD-Babyism
Title:Supernova
URL:http://winglin.net/fanfic/gdbabyish
Reviewer: Shia @ Secret-Melodies
Title: 5/5
I really like the title it’s a unique one I mean I learned about supernova’s in science and I hated that subject but your story made me love it…well not really love it but ugh never mind I’m confusing myself.
Poster/Background: 10/10
I think the poster and background matched your story really well and the girl in the poster actually looks like she would have a sickness not trying to be mean or anything lol but yea she looks like she would.
Forewords: 4/5
I liked the forewords too it was different it was short but it got you interested.
Plot: 10/15
The plot was also good but I have seen many with the sickness plot sorry I’m calling it sickness because I have no idea how to spell the sickness you gave her hehe…but anyway yes your plot was good.
Flow: 9/10
I liked the flow it went fast but it made sense.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 11/15
I think you did good especially on this area your vocabulary was way up there I mean I had to even look some words up to understand it better but thumbs up on this part you did good.
Characterization: 9/10
I liked your characterization I could tell how each of them really acted.
Originality: 7/10
Like I have said I have read many stories where the girl is sick and all but I liked it cause it was him who left and not her.
Writing style: 5/5
I like your style its different, and catches a person’s eye, well mine at least.
Overall enjoyment: 8/10
I really enjoyed this story, hands down, that’s all I’m going to say.
Bonus: 0/5
I just started to not give out bonuses because I think it’s kind of unfair
Overall score: 78/100