The Puzzle [Review]
Tuesday, July 15, 2008
Author: Chin Yu
Title: The Puzzle
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/thepuzzle/
Reviewer: Markie
Title: 5/5
Oh the title was good.. The puzzles had to do with the story greatly and i think the title you chose fit it wonderfully
Poster/Background: 9/10
I loved the poster was gorgeous expecially with the puzzle pieces in it.. The background was good to matched the poster.
Forewords: 4/5
The foreword was good.. It really didnt give detail about the 'Story' but you put the information about the characters which is really all you really would need.. I got hooked just reading about the characters profile.
Plot: 14/15
The plot was wonderful! I never had read a story with a plot like this.. so you get point for that! And the puzzles they did really tied the story together.
Flow: 9/10
Yes the flow was wonderful You didnt rush through it, you explained everything that needed to be explained and didnt add stuff that was unnecessary.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/10
Yours was really good, you didnt have the spelling errors i usually see in Storys which made me happy to no end. The words you used were good, the story was easy to understand.
Characterization: 10/10
You showed there personality's really well And Sophia who you would think was mean and stuck up actually had a nice side and showed her love for donghae, it was really enjoyable.
Originality: 9/10
This was pretty original, I have never read a story like this, making it exciting for me to read.. 'Who wants storys with the same feel and style?'.
Writing style: 4/5
I thought it was really good, it wasn't complicated, very easy to understand. You detailed the story really well, and gave a lot of emotion that is always good in a story.
Overall enjoyment: 10/10
Yes i enjoyed it! It had me smiling at the end something about yaoi's like these always get to me.. maybe the fact that they know its not right to love each other but cant help it. I would defiantly read your other story(s). Keep writing the way you do!
Overall score: 84/100