My girlfriend is my bodyguard [Review]
Tuesday, July 15, 2008
Author: ACC.
Title: My Girlfriend is My Bodyguard
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/acc_randoms
Reviewer: Markie @ sm-melodies.blogspot.com
Title: 5/5
I Thought the title was really good! Matched the story wonderfully!
Poster/Background: 9/10
I thought the poster was really pretty! Very well made.. The background was pretty plain.. but it still matched the poster good!
Forewords: 5/5
I thought the foreword was good, It made me interested to how it would turn out..
Plot: 13/15
The plot is a common one really, But you made it your own I really thought it was funny and sad.
Flow: 10/10
The flow was perfect! It wasnt fast and it wasnt slow! You never lingured and you also never rushed on it etheir.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 15/15
It was perfect! Really i have not read a story with this good of spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary usually The storys i have read have alot of errors or they type to fast and mess up there writing But yours was really good!
Characterization: 10/10
I loved how you portrayed KyuHyun and So Eun I loved So Euns personality and KyuHyuns.
Originality: 9/10
This was pretty original.. I Have never read a story like this and i really enjoyed it. I Laughed so much when So Eun grabbed Ryeowook and EunHyuks Hair. I said that its not an original plot.. But It has your originality unlike other storys.
Writing style: 5/5
Loved your writing style. You seperate the sentences which i think is good for storys because it seperates the thoughts.. Very easy understanding writing style.
Overall enjoyment: 10/10
I enjoyed it alot! I thought it was funny and made me laugh alot. Expecially how they met and it ended very sweet and made me smile like an Idiot.
Bonus: 4/5
Overall score: 95/100