I Love You~ [Review]
Tuesday, July 15, 2008
Author: tkanimelover
Title: I Love You~
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/tkanimelover3/
Reviewer: JiYoon
Site: http://sm-melodies.blogspot.com/
Title: 3/5
Your title isn’t something extravagant but it is simple and clean.
Poster/Background: 7/10
Your background is grey-colored which is nice but it doesn’t really fit your poster. Your poster is so upbeat but your background seems to contrast it.
Forewords: 2/5
Your forewords introduced the characters and showed who was going to be in the story, but what is the story about? It was ok for an intro.
Plot: 13/15
I’ve seen plots like this used often but in the writing world today, you can’t really call anything truly original. You took an overused plot and made it cute. So points for that!
Flow: 9/10
You have a steady pace and the story moves accordingly on its own.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 13/15
There were a few mistakes for the name spelling, but most of your grammar and vocabulary was flawless. Nice.
Characterization: 10/10
This is an apply fic, so it’s not your own original characters. But you took the applied girls and made them come to life on paper!
Originality: 9/10
Sorry but it’s a used plot but, you made it unique and into your own style, so good.
Writing style: 4/5
Your writing style is so adorable and I love those hearts when your switching. Very cute!
Overall enjoyment: 9/10
It was a bit bland but overall your story is wonderful and I enjoyed reading and reviewing it.
Bonus: 3/5 FOR REQUESTING AT SM-MELODIES~
Overall score: 82/100