Author:Animeangel1997
Title:Here's a Tip: Don't fall for vampires
URL:http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/animeangel_1/
Reviewer: Shia @ Secret-Melodies


Title: 4/5
Hehe I liked the title it was funny and interesting at the same time…well to me it was.

Poster/Background: 7/10
I think your poster could’ve done better it didn’t really match the story, and it didn’t catch my attention and I think that the background and coloring of your text could be better.

Forewords: 3/5
It was a typical one I think maybe if you were just a bit more detailed it would’ve been great

Plot: 9/15
Your plot wasn’t so original I have seen vampire knight and your story has almost the same exact concept but you do have only some parts that are original, which I liked

Flow: 9/10
I think your flow was very nice it went part by part, which was good.

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/15
You did have some grammar mistakes and your vocabulary could be a bit better, bigger words.

Characterization: 9/10
I liked your characters they were funny well not really but Jiro was, He entertained me and Calvin with his calm pose

Originality: 5/10
Like I said before this story was awfully very similar to Vampire Knight so it’s not so original

Writing style: 3/5
Writing style was okay, I think your chapters were kind of short not giving the readers enough to read, you should make them longer and more exciting

Overall enjoyment: 8/10
Even though I said all those things I actually kind of enjoyed it.

Bonus: 3/5

Overall score: 70/100