Having It Bad [Review]
Tuesday, July 15, 2008
Title:Having it bad
Author:soul's cradle
URL:http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/dusk_summer/
Reviewer:JiYoon @ Secret-Melodies
I want to help the author, I am not bashing on the author in any way, shape or form.
Title: 5/5
Your title foreshadows the story, nice.
Poster/Background: 9/10
Your poster and background is very cute, mellow, it’s nice.
Forewords: 5/5
Your forewords give an idea about the story and made me want to read on to find out about ‘her’ Very nice.
Plot: 13/15
Your fic obviously isn’t finished but it’s pretty original. A different twist to a regular storyline. Good job.
Flow: 7/10
It’s kind of hard reading with the dots going down, try writing without the dots. I think either way your readers will like your story.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 14/15
I can’t say it was perfect/perfect but it was pretty close to perfect so good job.
Characterization: 9/10
You describe your characters well and I can actually tell what’s going on, very nice.
Originality: 8/10
A story about a boy who has it bad for a girl. Similar plots but you made it your own so points for that.
Writing style: 3/5
Personally I think your writing style is a bit confusing. What’s up with like those huge spaces? Overall, the story is good so points for that.
Overall enjoyment: 9/10
I enjoyed your story a lot and I can’t wait until you finish it.
Bonus: 2/5
For requesting at SM-MELODIES!
Overall score: 84/100