The Edge of Sanity [Review]
Tuesday, July 15, 2008
Title: The Edge of Sanity
Author: Jian You
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/jianyou2/
Reviewer: JiYoon @ Secret-Melodies
Title: 5/5
Your title grabbed my attention right away. I mean who wouldn’t want to read a fic with a title like this? Great!
Poster/Background: 9/10
Your poster is obviously based on the genre of this story and even though it has blood and everything, it’s pretty. Also, your background matches your poster. They compliment each other.
Forewords: 5/5
Your forewords immediately hooked me and I had to read the story. It called out to me. ^-^.
Plot: 13/15
I’ve seen plots like this used often but in the writing world today, there really is no original idea anymore so good job!
Flow: 9/10
It was a oneshot and even though it was a oneshot, it was amazing. Steady and concise.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 15/15
I don’t think there were any mistakes at all. And that’s good because I DESPISE bad grammar.
Characterization: 10/10
Your character descriptions were really good. Even the character who had no name felt like she played a huge role.
Originality: 9/10
Again, used plot but, you made it into your own style so good.
Writing style: 5/5
I absolutely love the way you write. I’m not much of a fan for dialogue format.
Overall enjoyment: 10/10 I think your story is wonderful and I loved it.
Bonus: 2/5 FOR REQUESTING AT SM-MELODIES~
Overall score: 92/100