Angel Figurines [Review]
Tuesday, July 15, 2008
Title:Angel Figurines
Author:Animeuver
URL:http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Animeuver05/
Reviewer: Markie
Title: 4/5
Well, it does have to do with the figurines They both have.... But it isnt very eye catching.
Poster/Background:2/10
Well.. There is not poster... but theres a background sort of. You should get one make the story more appealing!
Forewords: 5/5
Perfect! It explained what it was about.
Plot: 12/15 Im sure there are many plots like this.. But sometimes original is a good thing. Fighting and then forgiving is really a very used plot i think. But i still liked it.
Flow: 7/10
Flow was pretty good, I will have to admit i did get confused when i was reading it because I didnt really understand it at first.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 14/15
Just a couple.. Not alot your grammer and vocab is really good.
Characterization: 7/10
Its a one-shot so i didnt really get an idea of what they were like, But you showed them well and i loved them both in it.
Originality: 9/10
I can tell it was original, even though i say the plot is used alot it does not mean you were not original with this, I can find many things that are like the figurines that showed there friendship.
Writing style: 5/5
I Like your writing style! Its very easy to understand.
Overall enjoyment: 9/10
Wished it could have been longer.. But other than that i enjoyed it and thought i was very nice and brought a smile to my face at the end.
Bonus: 4/5
Overall score: 78/100