~* D'Etre Avec Vous *~ [Review]
Tuesday, July 15, 2008
Title: ~* D'Etre Avec Vous *~
Author: Seo Vero
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/seovero03/
Reviewer: Ji_Yoon @ Sunset Avenue http://sm-melodies.blogspot.com/
Title: 5/5
I like your title, I think it has a nice ring to it. Very creative.
Poster/Background: 8/10
The color scheme of your story is very nice and goes well with each other, however your poster is kind of hard to see though.
Forewords: 5/5
Your forewords are good, it tells the characters, explains the plot a bit. Kind of like reading a blurb on a book.
Plot: 13/15
The plot is cute but it’s kind of used a lot. But that’s ok because no plot is usually original anymore but I liked the way you used it.
Flow: 9/10
It’s kind of hard to follow, suspenseful but kind of confusing.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 12/15
I saw many grammar and spelling mistakes but overall your vocabulary usage is ok.
Characterization: 10/10
I can tell that Hebe is cheerful and energetic while Houston and Wilber are kind of the opposites of her, well they do say opposites attract. ;]
Originality: 9/10
Again, no plot is original anymore but I liked the way you used it.
Writing style: 4/5
The way you write is kind of confusing but the style is nice.
Overall enjoyment: 9/10 So far your story is pretty cool, keep up the good work!
Bonus: 3/5 For choosing Sunset Avenue~
Overall score: 78/100