Author: Jesusloverr

Story: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/SoEul_Love/

Story Title: Falling For You

Reviewer: th-love

Title: 5/5

-- Falling For You, gave me a click of one point for the the title, So in the story, her bestfriend makes her other bestfriend click with her boyfriend's friend. But, I'm just thinking... The girl is falling in love with the guy right? Then your title deserves a 5.

Poster/Background: 7/10

-- 2 points for the poster and 5 points for the background all in all 7. The poster isn't in high quality, then there's a mistake on the poster: “I'm not a nice guy, butIm a cool guy” It should be 'I'm' the background is okay because two hearts means that it would be Chu Ga Eul and So Yi Jung getting together. In your poster, there's an inverted quotation mark “ in the end of the quote. So that didn't help.

Forewords: 5/5

-- So you gave us a Korean Dictionary or words that you put in your story often. Those are simple. You gave us a good teaser/sneak peek, a summary and all the characters that are in there. No given role, no attitudes, no “who they are” You deserve a 5 in this.

Plot: 13/15

-- The plot is about a girl falling in love with a guy and so does he. I like what you put in her F4 Casanova so he is the player and she's a goody two-shoes. The way you made the plot is interesting. I like how you did the plot, it's not fast. I like it ^^.

Flow: 7/10

-- It's not really smooth, the first and second chapter made me really confuse, I don't know where they are and who is talking. I don't like the 'Points-Of-View' thing, sometimes the writer makes wrong mistakes. [e.g Ga Eul's points of view: I was talking with Yi Jung when Ga Eul...] and that's the mistake. I was confused at that in chapter 2 who is talking?!

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/15

-- I had an easy time looking for mistakes I actually spotted a lot in chapter 1 in chapter 2, it went well, in chapter 3, only the spelling are the mistakes but I'll give you a good tip.

Please do not end your sentences that should be continuous. You always make a cut on it. Then your verbal phrases. You are pertaining to a subject not a thing. Your adverbs, instead of angry in chapter 2, make it angrily: He said angrily.

Also, the way they think. I don't know if they're saying it or thinking it I suggest you put a '' like this instead to know the person is thinking or an italicized word.

Characterization: 8/10

-- They play a good role in here but I was thinking there are a lot of characters in this story which made it totally confusing...

Originality: 8/10

-- So far, I read like this kind of story for a long time. So it wasn't new to me, then her bestfriend trying to make those two spark. It's not new.

Writing Style: 5/5

-- Everybody has their own writing style so I won't butt in to how they write.

Overall Enjoyment: 9/10

-- My eye didn't caught it in the begging but I should review or else I'd get in trouble. But when I read it through that made me say it again. It's AWESOME.

Overall Score: 77/100

P.S: Sorry if I'm late in giving this out to you, I forgot to announce that I would have a 3 week hiatus due to exams. ^^ I hope you aren't angry at me